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Bio
Name: Herocou Uchiha
Nickname: none yet
Age: 13
Weight: 135 pounds
Height: 5'7
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight

Looks & Appearance: Looks: a blue jacket with an orange short sleeved shirt .On both sleeves of the the jacket is an orange and red uchiha symbol coverd with a white leaf village symbol(same as back of the shirt).Has blue and orange sweats that has the e.Has blue sandals and white sacks on as well.He also has three strikes on his face that look like whiskers but are not whiskers because it's attached to his skin.Usually carries a 2 meter long thin katana on his back. because he uses that for battle.Herocou has the two tomoe sharingan in his possesion right now.He's so cool.

Personality: Personalty:
Herocou is one of the most stubborn,loud mouth, trash talkers ever.But... he is also one of the most bravest,courageous,stronghearted people ever. When he see someone in trouble, he does everything in his power to help them no matter wat the risk.A big part of his personalty is his agressiveness. He loves challenges and he loves when he fails (besides exams)so he can try again, and again, and again.With this aggressivness,courage,bravery,and smarts herocou gains an ego.He is always talking about him self thinkin he's the best. Lastly hero does have a calm side.When he's relaxing with his friends and in beautiful paradise eating cheeseburgers(his fav food)he calms down and shows that"i'm a nice guy "attitude.Hero acts crazy when under stress.For example when he forgets to study the day before the test he freaks out., instead of using the remainig time to study or ask a friend.Whenhe is in battle he is the exact opposite.He becomes more relaxed because he knows he will definetly lose the battle if he was stressed out.Hero is a enius when it goes to chakra and jutsu.He is always thinking of his on jutsu to make.People think he does this because he wants to get recoginzed.Some day he wants t become hokage.The first uchiha hokage to put that..Why do i have to tell u more about him when you can find out yourself.



Clan Information [OPTIONAL]
Clan Name: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai Name: Sharingan

Kekkei Genkai Ability & Description: Clan Name: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: The Sharingan: Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.

The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.

The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.

Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.

An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.

Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals.

Mangekyou Sharingan: Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Mangekyou Sharingan is a legendary doujutsu ability which has only emerged in a few clan members in its history. There is still mystery surrounding the eye and the Uchiha clan itself. Each user develops their own unique looking Mangekyou. The requirements for gaining the Mangekyou are very controversial in nature. After Uchiha Itachi murdered his best friend Shisui he gained Mangekyou. He told his younger brother Sasuke that to gain the Mangekyou, he too would have to kill his closest friend. Itachi told Sasuke that a scroll in their clan shrine revealed the true original purpose of the clan doujutsu. This scroll and Itachi himself revealed that the former leader of their clan, Uchiha Madara and his younger brother Izuna were the first to obtain Mangekyou. Madara himself did this by killing his friend, it's assumed Izuna also killed a close comrade.

Usage of the Mangekyou techniques drains quite a bit of a user’s chakra, more so than any other normal technique. Also as a result of Mangekyou usage, the bearer will slowly lose their vision. Madara lost his vision before his brother and sought to regain his power. To do so he removed Izuna's eyes and made them his own. With these new eyes, his Mangekyou took on a combined appearance of his original Mangekyou and Izuna's. These "Eternal" Mangekyou eyes returned his vision and gave him unbelievable strength. With this strength it was said Madara used Sharingan's normal ability to supress the Kyuubi and tame it.


Clan History: Clan History: The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps. The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye.

The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member.

Clan Symbol:


Skill & Rankthe sharingan and Genin
Village: Leaf village
Country: Fire country
Rank: Genin

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Fire (wind for later)

Special Characteristics: Has large chakra reserves.Has sharigan. When in one tailed mode (later) his speed id untracebal. Also has a sword and it has the abilty to turn on fire.(That' it)It sorta helps with jutsus.


Jutsu

Name: Kisunabbi
Species: coyote
Rank: c (ranks up when i rank up)
Elemental Affinity: Fire
Special Characteristics: Has three tails. Can grow up yo six.Grows a tail every time it ranks up

Physical Description:
.Kitsunabi is a golden coyote about feet tall and has three tails.Kitsunabi also has a three blue tattoos on it's face.He's about 5'7.It's taile are golden to but the tip is lighter.

Possession: The person who raised herocou taught him this technique.A few weeks before his death he taught hero this technique in the traning area.It took hero hours to summon it but he did.The canine was surprised to see a little boy to summon him."His power is just like...that other guy".The coyote asked him how he knew about the canine and the ninja said his god brother knew you so he snook up on him traning.The canine then attempted to eat the nice ninja because he thought he knew to much, but Hero stood in front of him making the canine stop in it's tracks."Who are you kid" The canine asked hero."I'm the person who summoned you."Hero responded."And I won't have you doing this to my friend."The two stared at each other seriously for about 30 seconds and then the coyote said."Alright fine...but i make the rules around here you got that."The coyote said looking up at the to determined ninja."Snot nosed brat...he has alot of guts standing up to me"The canine thought."Fine with me.Fine with you?"Hero asked the ninja.When Hero turned around he noticed the ninja had fainted.Hero and the canine started laughing and they both knew this was the beginning of something beautiful.


Jutsu List: [List of Jutsus]

Jutsu list:
jutsu name:Coyote howl
Type ninjutsu
Rank c
Decription :Exhales a blue stream of fire .It reaches 15 yards and the fire lasts for two posts.It can gives the opponent pretty bad burns.

Jutsu name:coyote bark
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:c
Description:The coyote barks out balls of fire and the balls are 2 feet tall.Usually barks out 3 but it's limit is five.Once hits opponent the opponent flys backward until hitting an object.

Jutsu name:coyote nest
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:d
Description:Creates a circle of fire around opponent while running around him or her.Once circle is created the blazing fire goes to about 3 feet high.This technique is perfect to corner an opponent.

Jutsu Name: Talk
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:e
Description:Has the abilty to talk to humans.Also has the abilty to talk to other animals.Also has the abilty to talk to nature like trees or bushes.

Jutsu name:Transformation
Type:ninjutsu
rank:e
Description:Can turn shape and form to look like other objects or living things (even human).Lasts until coyote got what he wanted

Jutsu name: coyote egg
Type:ninjutsu
rank:c
Description:When coyote has been defeated it give herocou the remains of his chakra making herocou faster and stronger.This coyote has givin hero the power to grow one tail when he is in desperate need of it.When he is in this "one tailed mode"
Hero's speed is 50% untraceable. with a three tomoe uchiha.Hero's strength becomes inormous.It is so strong he can knock down a tree in one punch.This lasts for 5 posts and when this is done all chakra will be gone.Still herocou has his katana.Instead of a chakra tail he grows areal tail with fur.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

[my jutsu]
Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction. They are the size of soccer balls.

Name: Body flicker technique
Type:ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type:Wind
This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported.

Jutsu name:Fire Release Ninja Art: Running Fire
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
This jutsu will create jets of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (so far, rings of fire or a circle of fire) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to create a tornado of flames.The user does a couple hand signs then blow fire circling opponent. They can reach five to ten yards.

Name:Small fire stream
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
Desription:Hero releases a small short ranged stream of flame at the opponent, causing them to collapse and get burned..This move requires one hand seal.Reaches only to 4 yards.

Fire release:Flame flower
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
Description:Hero jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors toward the opponent.They are the size of soccer balls.

Fire release:Intelligent hard work
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
Description:Hero shoots out a small fireball from his right or left hand that erupts into a giant firestorm after hitting the ground, causing widespread destruction to the area.


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Styles:Name:none
Type: none
Rank: none
Element: wind
Description:none




Background, History, & RP Sample

History:

Birth Arc:

When herocou was born both of his parents died .Nobody knows why they just did.So he grew up a screw up and got in to a lot of mischeif.Right when herocou was bout to do somtihng extreme a leaf ninja stopped him in his tracks and convinced him not to paint the whole village black.That is when herocou grew a bond with this guy. The ninja gave herocou the nick name whirl wind because herocou was supposed to be as "fast as the wind" (this guy was pretty fast too) and herocu was always in that "go with the flow mood".One day that ninja was killed by a ninja of his on kind till this day herocou searches for the killer and gets closer every day.Rumors are now going around that he has a brother and he was the killer.Hero of course does not know of this rumor because he would go out of the village and get him self into alot of trouble.Plus, they know he would do that because that is what his brother did.He thought his parents were still alive so he went out in to the wild .

Academy arc:

The first day of pre academy herocou was very nervous.All these other kids were so different than the area he grew up in.Once they went inside the school they all sat down in assigned seats."Herocou Uchiha ..."Sensei said. "Here "Herocou replied. "Alright you sit in the first row next to shiko and kairai" I walked over to these 2 kids hero never seen in my life. I sat down and class had begun."Alright students today we're gonna start off with..."my sensei voice faded out. "Hi i'm shiko."The kid on my right said.Hero looked for the person he was talkin to but couldn't find him"Are you talkin to me?'Hero asked him.Shiko laughed. From that day on i knew he would be something very important to me.Hero and him were friends ever since.(Later)Herocou and Shiko walked into the school as acdemy students which was really surprising to herocou and shiko. They both knew hero would pass(he got all a+ on my report card.)Shiko did not.He got some b's the rest wre c's and maybe d's.So now he would be more focused on school work(he says).Herocou grew closer and closer to shiko the more he was with him.Hero found out that shiko didn't have any parents just like me. So now with new seats in our classes (me and shiko still next to each other) we began to talk.Shiko passed me a note saying"do u thing we should have another recruit lol."Hero thought about it.This whole time Hero and shiko were together.This is also where hero meet him.I whispered back"sure".After a hard day at work looking for a new friend at school Hero and shiko saw kairai boushi. Hero and Shiko both had the same look in our eyes.He was perfect.He had a really good talent with building stuff(plus he let shiko borrow his homework sometimes)He was perfect.When we walked over to him he smiled.Then we all smiled.Hero,shiko and kairai all walked home that day and ended it with laughter.

RP Sample:


The deep black eyes belonging to the uchiha blinked a few times. His gaze was directed above, straight into the blue sky. Staring out into the endless space as the brisk morning air softly blew his black hair slightly to the side, in his mouth perched a tooth pick that leaned slight to the side. The uchiha slowly moved his tounge around the end of the tooth pick from the inside of his mouth, he felt the sharpness of the end as he took a deep breath in and out his nose. Everything was so.... Peaceful. The looming gray clouds from the night before had turned into white puffy ones that hung in the sky ever so softly. The relaxed uchiha slowly sat up and looked around, nothing was there to disturb him.

This was Herocou's normal life ever since he had became an academystudent , just relaxing and studying, day in and day out. His days could be predicted just like the sun rising and setting, nothing really too interesting could be found in the young students life. But most children at the age of 12 have a similar life, so he didn't really want to ask for much more, since it was obvious he had it luck as is.

A slow drip landed on the bridge of Hero's nose, he slowly tilted his head upwards and looked into the sky. Drip after drip came down on him through the tree overhead, it was clear that it was raining, or drizzling or whatever you would like to call it. The lonely uchiha slowly paced back to his home, at least a two mile walk at best. Hero hated the rain. Being a fire element and all, he had grown hatred toward rain and other forms of precipitation. It wasn't very common to get rain in Konhoa, so those who didn't like it were very annoyed.

After a few minutes of walking Hero's spiky hair was down on his face, covering parts of his eyes. He attempted to flick it away multiple times, but to no avail. Hero let out a slow yawn, his feet casualy kicked up small amounts of water as he walked. The soft pitter patter of the rain hitting to local shops created a rhythm with the students's foot steps, as he walked home everything made a certain music..... Everything was perfect(sarcasim)..


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You still havn't used the code. Without code, I cannot check this. If you need help with the code, PM me.

on chracter template it says code

Make sure everything is coded.

it is

No, it isn't. Again, if you need help, PM me. There are a lot of things that need to be coded.

wat about now

Youve got some double posts going on...can you get rid of the ones you don't want me to check? just edit them and make it say "deleted" and ill delete them for ya.

i deleted them and i think im good

The one's with the fox pictures are still there and need to be coded.... Get rid of one of em.

that's my jutsu
my summoning.
I need that

I know, I know. But you don't need it TWICE.

done

Looks has 82 words. You need 100.

Take out the things that are for "later." If your jutsu "ranks up when you rank up", put C-S and then describe what each rank does.

If something lasts for seconds, how many posts is that?

For the bark, make it 2 feet.

Nest, make it 3 feet.

Completely explain the egg jutsu in the description, not lead us somewhere else.

Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique : How large are the fire balls?

Fire Release Ninja Art: Running Fire: How far do the jets go?

Flame flower: Add more to description. Make it say the user, not Sasuke.


Great dragon fire Technique: Remove this. It is not C rank and will not be able to become C rank


Small fire stream: Make it require a handseal that must be held for the jutsu to work.

godly wind from the mountain: This is a wind technique. Remove it.


Intelligent hard work: Right or left what? Add more to description

Wind release pressure damage: Remove this.


Styles:Name:none
Type: none
Rank: none
Element: wind
Description:none
Fix whatever you were trying to do here....


Add 69 words to Birth Arc and remove the Genin Arc.

All of your extra info is OP. Take it out.

did everything

No "one tailed mode". That is Bijuu like and we are currently not accepting Bijuus. Sorry.

i erased it

3 more words to looks. No jutsu should have one sentence descriptions.

edited. Any other one sentence jutsu i got from your profile

No, they are atleast two sentences.

Approved. Make sure to post in the correct feedback topics.