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PostSubject: a hero in traning   a hero in traning EmptySun Aug 23, 2009 1:02 am

Hero ran in onto scene. “here we go,” he thought walked ran to a huge tree. Looking up, he smirked.
“Alright ...let's do it” Hero said to himself. "Run up a tree.” After thinking for a second, he said, “Too easy.”
Hero backed up and focused. “Focus the chakra,” he began to say, “to the the feet. Not alot. Not a little. Just the right.”When he thought he was good, hero opened his eyes and bursted at the tree. He put one foot on the tree and…the bark buckled under the amount of chakra he had focused. Hero quickly fliped off of the tree and landed.

There was a mark in the bark where his scratched his kunai at . “Not too shabby” he muttered, getting up and focusing his chakra again. He got up on the chakra pumped to his feet and ran at the tree again.
He must have had the right amount that time because Hero almost at the top of the tree with ease. His focus messed up a little bit but, other than that, Hero had done it. He sat on a branch 45 feet up the tree and looked out over the training field.Close to where he was, there was a pond with shimmering water. Hero sighed, jumping down the tree.Walking toward the pond for some water training

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PostSubject: Re: a hero in traning   a hero in traning EmptySun Aug 23, 2009 1:04 am

Hero walked to the pond and looked at it. Hero exhaled taking off his sandals and his shirt. “You just stay right their.”Pointing at his clothes. Hero took off his pants, “Who's gonna see me?”Hero walked over to the water’s edge and looked down. He could see very clearly he could see many rocks and some small fish that darted between them.
Standing up correct again, Hero focused the chakra to his feet again. He focused the same amount of chakra to his feet that he used when he walked up the tree a just now. Hero put one foot out and prepared to put his other foot out. When his foot touched the water, his foot brought his whole body into the pond he then sunk.Hero then swimmed back to the top gasping for air. Hero moved his arms, but he landed on his back on the ground. “No no no!I gotta do this”Hero stood up and exhaled through his mouth again. He focused more chakra to his feet and tried to step out on to the water again.Hero prepared to get his sink yet again, but was surprised when his foot actually stayed on the water’s surface. His eyes widened and looked at his foot.Hero’s foot rested on the water, not going beneath the surface. A few ripples moved outward from his foot, disturbing the smooth surface of the water. "Not to shabby Hero put his other foot on the water and it stayed on the surface, too.
“Sweet” he chuckeld, raising one foot and balancing on the other. The movement stirred up a few small ripples that went out from where the foot was and went under the other foot. Hero jumped up and landed on the water.
“Sweeeeeeeet!” Hero made a clone and starteted chasing it over to the edge and stepped back on to solid ground.The clone dissapeared. “What to do now that i perfect my chakra control.?”He looked over at the dummies."Well"Hero thought to himself."I have been trying to test my jutsu on something."

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